Details » FAXTOR ARTS Meeting Room
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- Category: Graphics & Design
- Description: Official meeting room for Faxtor Arts Staff
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- Created On: Jan 20, 2007
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| Dec 13, 2013
| Dec 13, 2013
What a good job you were there to look after her and call an ambulance! I liked your use of sound efctefs, and you used the ellipsis ( ) really well to build up suspense. I also really liked the use of the word spun' a really powerful verb to show how quickly you turned.Have a look again at this sentence now: I put one of my long hands onto the door when suddenly… Can you think of a better adjective for your hand than long'?
